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Past, Present, And…

Past, Present, And...

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Some of these stories, I’ve written years ago, and because my writing has improved so much since they were first written, I plan to return to these stories and edit them to improve the story as a whole. What you’re reading today is the original version.

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9 thoughts on “Past, Present, And…

  1. Greg Johnson

    Holy smokes!! So hard to read a daughter’s story of this sort but that was spectacular!!!!

    1. Danika

      Ohh, thank you so much!!

  2. Uncle Don

    This was a wonderfully interesting read, stepped out of the mainstream here and I loved it. Bravo

    1. Danika

      Thank you so much! I’m glad you enjoyed it!

  3. Marc Haine

    Well done Danika. Great story.

    You need to think about publishing your work.

    Marc

    1. Danika

      Thank you so much!
      One day, I would love to. 🙂

  4. Laurie Thompson

    WOW – absolutely blown away! This story yanked me a million miles away, and you’ve painted such vivid, amazing pictures with your words! It almost reminded me of the kind of story Mitch Albom would write, if you’re familiar with any of his amazing books. Also almost like a Poe story; it was like I was watching a movie as I read it. Absolutely amazing; this could be and should be published, Danika – wow, you’re a gift to this genre! BRAVO! ♥

    1. Danika

      Thank you so much!! I’m glad you enjoyed it this greatly. One day, I’d like to see publishing in my future, but I’m still a journey away from that milestone. Until then, I intend to keep scattering some short stories here. 🙂

  5. mrJOSH

    Well written ✅✌

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